Bottled up,
stocked in,
bolted and
What was
It is rotting
Author's Note: When intense feelings are messed with they turn opaque. One who feels too much will end up growing opacity of feelings and one who messed it will keep looking for breaking past the opacity.
Don't know who messed more and who felt more - the one who loved or the one who could get distant.
stocked in,
bolted and
fermenting.
No way out
to vent it,
all ends here
at the circular
glass edges.
They do not
come out
come out
and keep
moving in
circles.
What was
fresh, jubilant
and fragrant
is now
piling venom.
piling venom.
It is rotting
and stinking
in paucity
of love.
in paucity
of love.
It is turning
into piles of
abundant
nothingness
and opacity.
Don't know who messed more and who felt more - the one who loved or the one who could get distant.
P.S.: Opaque Feelings for O - April 17, 2015. My fifteenth post for the A to Z April Challenge.
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That was intense and so beautifully written. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Parul :)
DeleteIt kind of mirrors what i feel !! Beautiful words and beautifully expressed!!
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteDon't we all give up to those who neglect us and do not value us. :)
Sounds and looks rather claustrophobic! ;)
ReplyDeleteHaha..
DeleteThats a way to look at it. Thanks for stopping by :)
Intense poem and ur words has such a power.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot.
DeleteThey just flow and sometimes they don't come out... thts the thing with words :)
Quite intense!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Wow, that felt intense - great way with words:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteWords make me crazy
Words make me sane
I like both versions of me :)