Friday, 17 April 2015

Opaque Feelings
(O on Day 15 of A to Z Challenge 2015).

Bottled up,
stocked in,
bolted and
fermenting.

No way out
to vent it,
all ends here
at the circular
glass edges.

They do not
come out 
and keep 
moving in 
circles.

What was 
fresh, jubilant
and fragrant
is now
piling venom.

It is rotting 
and stinking
in paucity
of  love.

It is turning 
into piles of
abundant 
nothingness
and opacity.

Author's Note: When intense feelings are messed with they turn opaque. One who feels too much will end up growing opacity of feelings and one who messed it will keep looking for breaking past the opacity.

Don't know who messed more and who felt more - the one who loved or the one who could get distant.

P.S.: Opaque Feelings for O - April 17, 2015. My fifteenth post for the A to Z April Challenge.
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12 comments:

  1. That was intense and so beautifully written. Good job!!

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  2. It kind of mirrors what i feel !! Beautiful words and beautifully expressed!!

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    1. Thank you.
      Don't we all give up to those who neglect us and do not value us. :)

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  3. Sounds and looks rather claustrophobic! ;)

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    1. Haha..
      Thats a way to look at it. Thanks for stopping by :)

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  4. Intense poem and ur words has such a power.

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    1. Thanks a lot.
      They just flow and sometimes they don't come out... thts the thing with words :)

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  5. Wow, that felt intense - great way with words:-)

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    1. Thanks
      Words make me crazy
      Words make me sane
      I like both versions of me :)

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